You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter requesting help in returning my clothes, which I have forgotten in your hotel room. I have check-in room number 302 on 13th Jan 2019 and checkout two days later i.e., 15th Jan 2019.
I was rushing to pack my bags and reach airport on time on the checkout day; unfortunately, I left a pair of my clothes in the hotel room. The clothes I am referring to is a black blazer and a grey trouser, which was in the drawer near to the mirror. These are very special to me as it was my birthday gift from my mother.
I would highly appreciate if you can arrange to trace my garments and deliver it to my address mentioned on the envelope attached. I will bear the postal charges.
Thank you for your time and support. Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Satish Vemuri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...two days later i.e., 15th Jan 2019. I was rushing to pack my bags and reach a...
^
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ime on the checkout day; unfortunately, i left a pair of my clothes in the hotel ...
^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... clothes in the hotel room. The clothes i am referring to is a black blazer and a...
^
Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... your time and support. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Satish ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46052631579 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4388291887 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1022564716 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166778893279 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699359024039 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631257268504 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10465928788 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618687032596 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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