You traveled by long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to bus company. In your letter inform the bus company of when and where you traveled, describe your suitcase and what happened to it, explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase.
Respected sir,
I am writing this letter to tell you that I am very displeased by the bus service of your company.
I wanted to bring this to your notice that recently my brand new suitcase was damaged while I was travelling in a bus of your company. The bus number was PB 3201. Before my trip began, I handed over my luggage to the driver who put it in the luggage compartment of the bus. However, after I arrived and unloaded my luggage, I found out that my suitcase was broken.
While I was travelling from amritsar to patiala my suitcase was smashed under the weight of other luggage. In that six hour journey, a wheel out of four on the suitcase came off, it was terribly scratched and it's extendible handle is also not working. Not to mention, it was a branded suitcase.
Since damage was caused by carelessness of your employee, I want a compensation of 1000 rupees. Please transfer the amount according to the above given details.
Yours faithful
Mathew Hughes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected sir, I am writing this letter to tell you tha...
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Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... found out that my suitcase was broken. While I was travelling from amritsar to patia...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he above given details. Yours faithful Mathew Hughes.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59428571429 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58314789767 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7238581508 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320363194468 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114343046538 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092531435731 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176623873413 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857300796637 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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