You travelled by plane last week and your suitcace was lost. You have still heard nothing from airline company. Write to the airline and explaine what happened. Describe them your suitcase and tell what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I’m Max Gordon, on the 4th of November I flew by the First Airline plane from Torronto to Moscow. I’m writing to inform you that one item of my laggage was lost. It is my suitcase. Before I seat in the plane, I passed my laggage, which included two road bags and the suitcase. When we landed to Moscow, I asked your staff to return me my baggage, however two bags are the only items I received. One member of your staff insured me, that they accidently left it in Torronto in airport and asked me to wait a few days untill my suitcase would be sent by intenational post to my appartment in Moscow. However, it hasn’t happened.
The suitcase is made of high-quality leather, it’s very expensive. The color is black with steel handle on the top. There are three sections and it was full of my working documents. I’m IT specialist and I took a three books about computer technology, some arrangements and most important are my credit cards. I left in the suitcase my wallet with my credit cards. So I need you to return my it in any case.
I want you to require your working staff have they found my suitcase. If they haven’t, they can check footage in security cams from the airport. When you find it, please send it to my address in Moscow.
Thank you in advance for considering my problem .
Yours faithfully,
Max Gordon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to to Moscow. I'm writing to inform you that one item of my laggage was lost...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ou in advance for considering my problem . Yours faithfully, Max Gordon.
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem . Yours faithfully, Max Gordon.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'in any case']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241721854305 0.220444632235 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.155629139073 0.167888034529 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0331125827815 0.0606518309736 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0198675496689 0.0506257000042 39% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.165562913907 0.118615021944 140% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0960264900662 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.023178807947 0.041066498444 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56673417978 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298013245033 0.0385302599488 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.046357615894 0.0714148451538 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00662251655629 0.0191574576366 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00993377483444 0.00930345855455 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1370.0 1141.60824742 120% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.134020619 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52419354839 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29435483871 0.284621296913 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229838709677 0.211203875043 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149193548387 0.133321485273 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0766129032258 0.0843313296314 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56673417978 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622163163488 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.6315307433 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 12.9587628866 139% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7777777778 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8063757222 44.7399317507 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 90.9928171075 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.277777777778 0.613754768223 45% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 36.7616487455 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.05825242718 1.13073093955 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297359689545 0.331212695627 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11884128794 0.0927372745006 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0761177042459 0.0736520305886 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482796475908 0.579516596996 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167396776482 0.180689518051 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106441204678 0.122183219658 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508648392872 0.0765303033291 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.281794059609 0.211926503985 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.098418221755 0.0737400523855 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18983685339 0.203819188451 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731338810604 0.067151250289 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.0206185567 199% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.56701030928 234% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 8.32989690722 156% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.