You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to tell you about my suitcase which was lost while I was travelling to Delhi via your plane as its been one month and I have heard nothing regarding it from your side.
Last month, I travelled from Chandigarh to New Delhi via flight no IX2341 and i submitted my luggage at the flight counter but when I reached at my destination, I noticed that one of my bag is missing. I informed the concerned staff and waited another one hour for the same but in vain.
The bag was of light brown color with four-wheeler trolley of American Tourister company and my initials R.M are also carved on it and it contained my clothes and my important documents which i specially placed in that bag as I thought will be misplaced if I carry them in my handbag. I have submitted my complaint with the help staff and on the company's website.
I am in dire need of my documents as I am having interview next week, so, please let me know the status of my grievance.
I am hoping for positive response from your side as early as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Rupali mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h to New Delhi via flight no IX2341 and i submitted my luggage at the flight coun...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bmitted my luggage at the flight counter but when I reached at my destination, I ...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the same but in vain. The bag was of light brown color with four-wheeler trol...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht brown color with four-wheeler trolley of American Tourister company and my ini...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...can Tourister company and my initials R.M are also carved on it and it contained ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... me know the status of my grievance. I am hoping for positive response from yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4801980198 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55961659129 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3122838199 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161472715193 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073909028381 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970005108577 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100672364084 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118662061157 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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