You want to go for a short holiday and invite a friend to join. Write a letter to this friend, in your letter:
• Explain why you need a holiday
• Tell him him/her about the place you want to visit
• Say why he/she should come
Dear Remo,
I am writing this letter to invite you to join me for 4 days holiday to Las Vegas. It would be wonderful if we can get off together.
I have been working for the last 6 months with no holiday as our company had a huge construction project with tight deadline and I am tried hence looking for a quick break to Vegas.
Las Vegas is an electrifying city to unwind, and I am planning to book a good hotel for our stay. I think you will recollect that really enjoyed playing in the casino in India and Vegas is the casino capital, we will have a blast!
I really want to go on this trip to relive the wonderful times we spend during college days. Please try and confirm your dates and I am flexible and off work for the entire month of Feb. I am planning to rent a Harley Davison bike in Vegas, this will tempt you for this trip.
Reply soon, I need at least a day to make the booking.
Yours truly,
Nancy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Remo, I am writing this letter to invite you t...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...es we spend during college days. Please try and confirm your dates and I am flexible an...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a day to make the booking. Yours truly, Nancy
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, really, so, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11666666667 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17910248826 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2644540768 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189861130029 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750687017813 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808498391835 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987084977458 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743756988739 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.