Hi Calvin,
Trust that you are well.
I am excited about writing this letter to congratulate you moving in your new house in New York. I think it would be a great place for your family especially when you soon to have a baby.
Besides the congratulations, I hereby bring something that you might interested that I found a set of dining chairs in my store when I cleared my house last month. However, there are some scratches on the surface of these chairs but not noticeable. Chairs are built in wood and manufactured in China, and I bought it two years ago from a furniture warehouse named FIGTREE. Since it is second-hand furniture, I can hand over to you by a moderate price if you are keen to have it.
Please feel free to drop me a call if you want to verify further details about its condition. I would also like to invite you to come to my house next weekend to have a physical inspection. At last, I would like to wish you a great week.
Regards,
Oscar. K
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, second, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4010989011 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59522775505 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8850818024 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322689599746 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104802910613 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690782980592 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191245174983 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634922001456 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.