The overall society has become increasingly materialistic because success and happiness are often associated with the accumulation of wealth. There is a common view of the majority that contentment is directly proportional to wealth. The rationale behind this opinion is that having a huge bank balance entitles an individual to possess anything following his / her desires; however, there are many other priceless things a human needs to lead a contented life.
The privileged class often finds immense pleasure in the acquisition of expensive items. Certainly, the idea of being able to afford a luxurious lifestyle such as living in an exuberant house, traveling in an expensive car and wearing designer's clothes fills them with joy. This is the reason many superstars, for instance, share their happy moment pictures with their sports cars on social media. In addition, wealthy individuals are being treated in society with utmost respect which is another reason why people gravitate towards money.
However, there are many other essential elements of life without which a person cannot attain a joyful feeling. Firstly, it is vital for an individual to have been surrounded by sincere family and friends whose presence can make one's life joyful. Similarly, having a high paid might result in huge inflow of cash but not having an inappropriate work-life balance may devastate someone's personal and professional life. Professionals working in senior-most positions are often found frustrated with their life. Finally, health is an important aspect too.
To conclude, although money offers a lot many perks but there are many other important aspects of life which is vital for a person to be happy and joyful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ily and friends whose presence can make ones life joyful. Similarly, having a high p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35055350554 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77172723871 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0929084895 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256580473855 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732261079621 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637778806361 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146259268345 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503682730657 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.