Hey Alex,
I am incredibly sorry for not have been in touch recently. Things have been a bit hectic. The big news is that I have been transferred to regional office in Bradford and I will be moving there by the end of next month.
As you probably know that this would be my first visit to this place and I'd need your assistance in finding the apartment. As far as I know, our regional office is in downtown near the Princeton metro station and I would prefer to live somewhere just a stone's throw from workplace. I'm not a massive fan of large apartment as it is difficult for me to keep it tidy considering my hectic schedule. Therefore, I request you to please get me few quotations of cosy 2 bedroom apartments from the property rental companies.
I realise that you would be having a busy routine but I would not have asked for the favour if it was not tremendousy important for me.
Please write back to me as early as possible.
See you soon in Bradford.
Ammar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a stone' or simply 'stones'?
Suggestion: a stone; stones
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44198895028 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56266655101 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635359116022 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3735605832 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196819344988 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697497969734 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566012102109 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100593223794 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683040455356 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.