These days, individuals are excessively obsessed about their physical appearance. They are often motivated by galmorous models and celebrities and in an attempt to look alike these famous personalities, people tend to spend extravagantly on prets, hairstyling and cosmetics. This essay will discuss whether spending hefty amount on one's outer looks are righly justified and what could be the potenial ramifications of this trend.
To be glamarous and fashionable is the first and foremost requirement for a particular class of society especially stars associated with media industry. Because they are in the public eyes wherever they go - be it a restaurant, hospital or any public space - so they have to carry themselves in presentable and trendy styles. However, it is worth noting that their outfits and make up are sponsored by famous designers and beauticians in most occasions. For instance, a movie star's outfits are fully financed by the producers when they are out and about for the movie's promotion. Clearly, this makes sense that not everyone should spend astronomical amount in order to look like a celebrity.
There is a cost to stay trendy and fashionable. If a vast majority of population starts to purchase clothes or beauty products which are exorbitantly expensive, people from lower middle class tend to find it difficult to afford and will start to develop inferiority complex. Furthermore, stay up to date with fashion will become a status symbol and will lead to disparity among the rich and poor class. As a result, people will look for illigit means of fund to purchase thenselves fashionable clothes and cosmetics and it is highly likely that they will plunge into crime world.
In conclusion, stay up-to-date with fashion may be the requirement of some professional fields, however, general public should not follow the trend blindly without knowing the background story.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...ers when they are out and about for the movies promotion. Clearly, this makes sense th...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...t of some professional fields, however, general public should not follow the trend blindly wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28947368421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89027855258 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0659866633 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254032547174 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799500768214 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449245118697 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13618574133 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781206722293 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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