You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain
Why you are selling the television
Describe the television
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Gary,
Hope you are doing well.
I’m doing fine, though my life is quite hectic at the moment because, as you know, I am moving abroad and there is so much to do!
There are a few things that I can’t take with me because they are too big so I am seeing if any of my friends would be interested in buying them. One of the things I do not want to take with me is my television, and I thought you might like to buy it off me for a cheap price.
It’s a 32“ flat screen TV, and it’s a Phillips model. It has a USB port so you can just plug in a thumb drive to watch movies or listen to music. It has great stereo surround sound.
As you know, I’m leaving the country at the end of the month, which is only two weeks away. So if you want to see it, it would be best to come on 20th or 21st. That will give me time to sell it elsewhere if you are not interested.
Ok, I look forward to seeing you. Let me know if you can’t make it.
All the best,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09068027807 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3891502086 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219696352282 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882421700026 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563435301221 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126287751003 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543294931039 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.76 7.59969072165 76% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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