You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Hello Manisha,
Hope you are having a great time. Thanks for writing the last letter, glad to hear that you topped your college again. Now when your exams are over don't you get bored alone in room? Actually, I am writing this letter to tell you about my movement to New York City for my new job. Remember, I told you about my interview in a new company? I gave that interview just for experience and thankfully got selected.
Now when I have to move to another city. I would not be able to carry all my stuff with me while transition. Although I love my TV, but thinking of getting rid of it because of its size. Then I thought about you that it could be of much use for you. Since your exams are over now, plus you have shifted in a single room so having a TV is not a bad idea. My television is of LG company, 38 inches in size and it is black. Furthermore, is in a great condition as I have had used it for not more than one year.
However, if you are interested in buying it we can meet next week Thursday at my home. Also, we can discuss about the price after you see the television. I hope you will really like it.
Please do not hesitate to give a call should you have any questions.
Thank you!
Warm regards
Monika Goswami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ege again. Now when your exams are over dont you get bored alone in room? Actually, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22727272727 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2387848578 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632231404959 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.5039201719 44.8134815571 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.8333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289755448603 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914422737064 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735831117792 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166209079585 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711397520443 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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