You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain -
• why you are selling the television
• describe the television
• suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Jack,
I hope you are doing great. How is your new job going? It’s been so long since we last met. I would like to let you know that I wanted to sale all my furniture as soon as possible. I thought you liked my brand new Samsung LCD which I purchased few months ago.
The reason behind all this hurry is that not only I got my Permanent Residency of Canada but also I selected in prominent software company of Canada. Before I departure, I decided to get rid from all my old things also by selling all these stuff I can earn some money for my shopping.
As you are found of new electronic devices so I felt that I wants to buy my 42 inch brand new Samsung LCD. This LCD has very good internet connection and has a pen drive ports. All the cables and other parts of it are in a very good condition. Also, you happy to know that this is under the guarantee till next two months.
Why you don’t come in to my house on coming Sunday. So that we can spend some time together and also negotiate the price. Moreover, you can check all the functions and understand the procedure how you can operate this.
Anyway, I can’t wait to hear from you,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g LCD which I purchased few months ago. The reason behind all this hurry is that...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 61, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...new electronic devices so I felt that I wants to buy my 42 inch brand new Samsung LCD...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f it are in a very good condition. Also, you happy to know that this is under the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3125 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26866109906 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0350655449 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217659701695 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761482818579 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595425847708 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131132519506 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633160044796 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.