You want to take a holiday in another country. During your holiday you would like to meet one of your friends who lives there.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• describe the types of place you would like to visit
• ask some questions about accommodation
• suggest some activities you could do together
Dear Sheetal,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing this to express my excitement about Dubai trip and most importantly,will be able to meet you. I am planning to visit it in the end of December, mostly after 27th December. Have to finish my projects by that period.
We are total 5 friends. Each one of us have made different researches about the places to visit and eat. All of us have come to a conclusion that there are amazing tourist attractions like Dubai mall,Mall of Emirates,dessert safari, Al Kudra- a remote place famous for new year celebration, which is only an hour drive from your house. We would love to visit that world-famous "Burj Khalifa" at the very first go.
Can you please suggest some good hotels near your area? Before how many days do we have to book, as it will be a Christmas time to must be jam-packed.
Would love to invite you for the activities like dessert safari, Dubai mall,visiting a tea café together. Do inform in advance in your office . It will be great to recollect old memories.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Reena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sheetal, Hope you are doing great. I am writing t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , will
...nt about Dubai trip and most importantly,will be able to meet you. I am planning to v...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Mall
...zing tourist attractions like Dubai mall,Mall of Emirates,dessert safari, Al Kudra- a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dessert
...actions like Dubai mall,Mall of Emirates,dessert safari, Al Kudra- a remote place famous...
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Line 8, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , visiting
...tivities like dessert safari, Dubai mall,visiting a tea café together. Do inform in advan...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...her. Do inform in advance in your office . It will be great to recollect old memor...
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you soon. Best Regards, Reena
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79896907216 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79961488852 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701030927835 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.499108903 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9333333333 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229089214803 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655472599857 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588365326444 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119753447105 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288451947384 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.