you want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in charge of that organization explaining.
Why do you want to help?
How can you help them?
When will you available?
Dear sir,
My name is Manmohandeep Singh and I am working in impact kitchen as a line cook. Last week, there was an advertisement in the newspaper about your organization that you guys help the older people of our community. Actually, it inspired my mind totally to join you. I would like to offer my voluntary services for any kind of help in the evenings and on weekends.
In our area, we have huge amount of elder people who needs help on daily basis, as most of them live alone and others in old age houses. They spend most of their time alone and they always need some to take care for them like in caring groceries and medicines from stores, cooking food and so on, As I am certified in healthcare and first aid and in cooking course so I want to use such qualities to help them. Most importantly for me it will enable me to utilize my free time in a productive way.
Sir, I would be highly grateful if you give me such opportunity to work in this field. I am working in morning shifts five days in a week so I always have free time in the evening and on weekends. I can join you from next week. Please feel free to call me for any further information. My contact number is 6458078395.
Yours faithfully,
Manmohandeep Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'guy'
Suggestion: guy
...spaper about your organization that you guys help the older people of our community....
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive way" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... will enable me to utilize my free time in a productive way. Sir, I would be highly grateful if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37068965517 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51308998728 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1283268251 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268446528033 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854757256579 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756119955493 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168706909756 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599727647855 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.