You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager.
In your letter, you should:
describe the tour
tell what you liked about the tour guide
recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour guide
Dear Sir,
Recently I had been to Shilong with the excellent travel service from your company and I am writing this to really applaud for the wonderful experience I had with your service, especially, our tour guide Mr.Smith.
To begin with, it was a 4 days trip starting from 4th of December. Our solemn purpose was to explore the flora and fauna of the Shilong. Therefore, to visit all the new places, it was vital to have a knowledgeable guide along with us. To my satisfaction, the tour guide provided by you was not only professional but also well talented.
Mr.Smith was our tour guide for the entire trip. Right from day 1, he was very enthusiastic and was patient in explaining about the various tourist spots . We visited many sites including the Temples, Gardens, Museums where he not only helped us to get an insight about the new places but also with his impeccable fluency in local language made us to interact with the native people and understand their culture.
His is a valuable asset to your concern and I would definitely recommend him to either get an increment in his remuneration or you can also promote him to the next level in order to encourage other employees to work effectively as the way he does.
Once again, thank you very much for the exciting service.
With regards,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
... service, especially, our tour guide Mr.Smith. To begin with, it was a 4 days trip ...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
...ofessional but also well talented. Mr.Smith was our tour guide for the entire trip....
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...plaining about the various tourist spots . We visited many sites including the Tem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73043478261 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61073059592 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5484300702 44.8134815571 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22008667778 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864024656843 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741263384964 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117239931892 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434260876054 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.