Some people think homework is necessary for children to get good marks in the examinations, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed by many people that homework raises the marks of students in their exams, whereas, others have contradictory views. Although, day to day homework could be a frustration for kids, in my opinion, I strongly believe that, practicing homework regularly can induce the academic band scores.
On the one hand, there is a proverb stating that “Practice makes man perfect”. To illustrate this statement, performing daily tasks regularly given by their tutors not only uplift the grade of the students but also enables them to rectify their common mistakes. Further, teachers could identify the weak areas of the children by correcting their assignments. In addition, settling at one place for doing day today exercise will boost up student’s concentration and enrich their quality of patience. For instance, a recent research conducted by NTI USA revealed 67% of kids who are habitat in doing their homework are the topmost performers in their public board examinations.
On the other hand, many students raise a flag that they rarely find time for their recreational activities rather staying at their cocoon for a whole day, striving hard in order to get best results in their tests. As a result, students are under mental stress and even some kids are reported of having plethora of chronical health diseases like cholesterol, high blood pressure especially diabetes. An apt illustration is my cousin whose age is only 8 years weighing 96 kilograms underwent a weight loss surgery.
To conclude, despite having some negative impacts we have by doing regular homework’s, there are numerous advantages it contains and plays a significant role in shaping one’s career to reach the pinnacle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, even so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32116788321 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95150568282 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682481751825 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.13673139 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131839488411 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489980330303 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442396507687 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083302239059 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461480949671 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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