you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on an holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:
>how you felt about the trip and
>how did you take care of his house in his absence.
Dear Rachna,
How are you?
I hope this letter finds you well and your holidays would be gone enjoyable as I had.
I am writing this letter just to thank you for helping me on my trip at London by giving your flat for 10 days.
It was a pleasurable holiday. It would be more jovial if you joined us with your family. Anyways, I agree that you had already booked your tickets for Canada. Moreover, I would say that your house is neatly arranged and what I liked the most was, the rays of the rising sun entered into the guest room. As a result, effortlessly we were getting a good amount of vitamin D in every morning which made us all day energetic and active.
I also want to include that I had been done my best to keep the house neat and clean. My wife used to vacuum daily because she was keen to keep house spotless. I was surprised to see that my kids always played in the garden instead the living room as they did in our home which resulted that all home appliances were safe.
I wish that we could meet again at my home and we would spend next holidays together.
With best wishes.
Your friend,
Suman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d what I liked the most was, the rays of the rising sun entered into the guest ro...
^^
Line 11, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess. I was surprised to see that my kids always played in the garden instead the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, moreover, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31308411215 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10463575439 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64953271028 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7424033 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9285714286 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297722808032 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106268553045 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819270787003 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137948191202 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824154070392 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.