Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to reschedule my planned interview on 23 August 2020 due to some unforeseen circumstances.
Unfortunately, yesterday my son was diagnosed with liver cancer and doctor’s panel recommending to transplant on the same date as of interview. In due course of time I also need to discuss this matter with another specialist to seek a second opinion. Moreover, some crucial steps need to be taken at my end in order to manage the hospital financials.
Therefore, I would request you to be kind enough to advise me another date and time with a gap of one week at least following the current date. Please oblige me by allowing me to conclude all the critical matters with my family.
I am highly motivated to work with your prestigious organization and assure you that my skills best match to position. All my credentials also will lead you to have a confidence in me as potential candidate. My current employer recently awarded me employee of the month award.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Jhon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regards to reschedule ...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended transplanting'.
Suggestion: recommended transplanting
...ed with lever cancer and doctor’s panel recommended to transplant on the same date as of interview. In du...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s need to be taken at my end in order to manage the hospital financials. Theref...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Jhon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91017964072 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86966950149 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688622754491 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3644980515 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5454545455 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168007071039 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607065060875 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473581651008 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810426369434 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365246627548 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.