The new generation’s moral values are deteriorating day by day and juvenile crime rate has skyrocketed in various parts of the world. Although, there are people who advocate to punish teenagers equally as those of adults. Others argue against this approach and point out to assess in the context of crime. I strongly disagree with this idea of teenagers obtaining punishment and in this essay, I will defend my opinion with the help of certain examples.
Firstly, the teenagers during this phase of life have been experiencing changes in their body and thought process. Most of the things are usually not clear to them and they would be doing a variety of activities without any wrong intention. This attitude sometime leads them to commit a crime accidently. For example, one of my friends was at a shooting competition and during the cleaning of guns the bullet shot a worker in the facility. What I mean is that he did not had any intention of killing anyone, but it happened inadvertently.
Another reason why I disagree with the punishment of youngsters as that of adults. Teenagers are not a serious threat to society and might need guidance to be useful to the society. The punishment may permanently offend them, and they might never return to normal life. Considering the argument, young people quickly adapt to the environment and keeping them with criminals will lead them deeper into the crime’s world. To sum up, all teenagers would start to think the world ends here and jail is our home where we have our friends.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe young people should be punished for their crimes. So that punishment can rehabilitate the offender. E.g, there are cases where the inmates studied during punishment and never re-offended again once they returned to their normal life.
In conclusion, I would say that teenagers should not be treated in the same way as adult criminals. Although, many believe that crime is crime and young people should be punished accordingly. Since the punishment is soft and did not serve to deter crime. We should search more effective ways of punishment so that offenders should be beneficial for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...eople who advocates to punish teenagers equally as those of adults. Others argue against t...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...acility. What I mean is that he did not had any intention of killing anyone, but it...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le should be punished for their crimes. So that punishment can rehabilitate the offende...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'treat'
Suggestion: treat
...n, I would say that teenager should not treated in the same way as adult criminals. Alt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, to sum up, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9262295082 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65464823951 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554644808743 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6080698732 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271520390506 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766650595707 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571104767188 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144111071481 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450339126588 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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