DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
I am writing to you to apply for an opening at your Delhi Office. Allow me to elaborate.
At the first place, I would like to give you some insight into my educational background. I graduated with MBA Degree from IIM in the year 2009. I had finished by Undergraduate studies from University of Delhi in 2006.
In addition, I am presently working with Morgan Stanley in their investment banking segment and with my sheer hard-work, I have won employee of the year 6 year in a row which I feel says a lot about my professional capabilities. Furthermore, prior to my engagements with the present office I was working with HSBC for 2 years and was dealing with basis portfolio management.
Finally, I feel that I will be an asset to your company as you are now venturing into investment banking sector and with my experience I feel I can be a valuable addition to your company.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, so, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64161849711 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84795757944 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0478187565 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281769563557 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990535813049 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847214281193 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148014391174 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804868814744 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.