You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company that shipped the equipment In your letterDescribe the problem with the equipmentExplain how this problem is affecting your workS

Dear sir/Madam,
My Name is Hassan and I am writing about my problem with the printer which I bought last month for working purposes. My Invoice Number is xxx and the issue date is 20-02-2020.
I have bought this printer to print a numerous papers each day without being distracted, because the sales person told me this one is really good at works with high work-loads. Unfortunately, I have to tell you the cartridge is going to be finished very soon, so, I can not finish my daily printing tasks. Besides, This is disconnecting regularly and I could not diagnose why.
If I cannot finish my work on-time, the company which I work for, will set fines and accordingly, you should pay that fines as this is completely related to the quality of the product.
I would appreciate if you step in and solve my problem as soon as possible, either by replacing the printer completely or by maintaining it regularly, so I can continue printing every day.

Yours,
Hassan

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'paper'?
Suggestion: paper
...bought this printer to print a numerous papers each day without being distracted, beca...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71176470588 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73931393426 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8880889419 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21319070602 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769862008443 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626288178165 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125116471455 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239064478096 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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