You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment In your letterdescribe the problem with the equipmentexplain how this problem is affecting your wor

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to describe one of the problem I am facing during my job hours. The lighting of at my desk is not only bloor but now some of the pot lights also started to flickering. As per my observation, this isssue is only happening when light stay contineous on for higher than 2 hours. If I give pause after 2 hours, it comes on for 2 more hours.

This switching loop giving me very hard time to concentrate on work; especially, during morning and evening time. Warm white lamps are also pushing my eyes towards the working space.

I am wondring three things could be done by your side if possible. Fisrst of all, it would be appreciated if you arrange repair for the switching problem. Secondly, light would be more bright rather than dim. Finally, I would like to request natural white light when the old one will be replced.

Your faithfully,
Divyesh Rakholiya

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of at my desk is not only bloor but now some of the pot lights also started to flickering. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be more bright rather than dim. Finally, I would like to request natural white li...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62576687117 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45541369613 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9210323069 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5454545455 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15037632729 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563345239995 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523536590204 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078247073616 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256291175936 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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