You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letterdescribe the problem with the equipmentexplain how this problem is affecting your wor

Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to you regarding the scanner pro that I purchased from your company 6 months ago. My scanner stopped working two days ago after I was trying to scan a 2-page document. First the tiny light at the back went red and it shut down after couple of minutes.

I am a document controller in a very big company. Every day I have considerable amount of documents that I need to review. Most of the time I have to scan the paper ones as we communicate through computer network because I work from home. This issue has impacted my daily duties heavily. I have to go out of house maybe two or three times a day which is very time consuming.

I will send this scanner to you today. Could you please substitute this and send me a new one as it has been less than a year I own this product.

Look forward to hearing back from you.

Faithfully yours,
Sarah Jackson

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, may, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30177514793 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36006419714 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2570029604 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5833333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147358888955 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472664707995 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381040649167 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838418612408 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183943404467 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.