Dear Mr. and Mrs. smith,
My name is Rana Borjian I am writing to you regarding the advertisement you posted on the Australian magazine.
I am moving to Australia next week and was looking for a job when I came across your job posting. I would be thrilled if you accept me. This would be a win-win situation for both of us. I enjoy vising new places and meeting different people. I have studied early childhood education for my bachelors in Canada and I have worked with many kids in the kindergarten during my studies. I believe my experience and knowledge is a suitable match to your needs.
I plan to visit sightseeing and go hiking in my free time in Australia. I have heard and read a lot about the nature there. As I am moving there in the spring, I believe it would be a perfect time to do outdoor activities.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and look forward to hearing back from you.
Best regards,
Sara Jackson,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in the kindergarten during my studies. I believe my experience and knowledge is ...
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Line 4, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edge is a suitable match to your needs. I plan to visit sightseeing and go hikin...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is a suitable match to your needs. I plan to visit sightseeing and go hiking...
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Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...go hiking in my free time in Australia. I have heard and read a lot about the nat...
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Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing back from you. Best regards, Sara Jackson,
^^^^^
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Best regards, Sara Jackson,
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46857142857 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58874171625 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6440906613 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1538461538 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202979045805 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609814733923 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676525349235 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110894705516 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832302937144 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.