It is argued that having friends who share similar mindset with you is beneficial, while some people assume it is advantageous to find friends who does not share the same perspective as you. Even though, a friend with opinions close to us is a great company sometimes we need a buddy who disagrees with us to gives us proper guidance. In this essay both views will be argued followed by a conclusion.
On the one hand, having friends with whom you have many similar interests is pleasant. You can always share what you are going through with them during difficult times and be sure that they understand you and support you. In a Harvard business review case, it was indicated that people who have a support group of people with similar view and talk to them during hardships have higher serotonin level.
On the other hand, it is beneficial to have buddies who does not always agree with you and have different views toward different subjects. When you have a mate, who is not similar to you, you can learn many different things from them as they look at every matter in a different way than you. Sometimes is life, we need a friend who criticize us and gives you a wake-up call. For instance, when you have a non-smoker friend, she or he can alarm you regarding the harms of smoking rather than having friends who all smoke.
In a nutshell, some believe it is good to have friends with alike opinions beside you as a support while other suppose having companions with different views is more beneficial to teach you look at things otherwise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hardships have higher serotonin level. On the other hand, it is beneficial to h...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ho is not similar to you, you can learn many different things from them as they look at every ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... from them as they look at every matter in a different way than you. Sometimes is life, we need a ...
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Message: The adverb 'Sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: Is Sometimes
...ery matter in a different way than you. Sometimes is life, we need a friend who criticize us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64492753623 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40263018379 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4747119159 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187514211651 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900515051 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044544709068 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133553062921 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033814716065 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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