Big shopping malls are nowadays substituting many small shops. This happening has resulted in the closing down those small shops. From the buyer point of view the situation has become more convenient however, from the business owners’ side it is not a very positive development.
In today’s busy life, people rather to go to a shopping mall in which everything they need is provided such as groceries, apparel, and so on. To avoid traffic jams and save time, customers go to a big mall to see many shops at the same time and purchase what they need instead of wondering around different small local shops. For instance, in Iran there are many malls opening in which there is a big grocery, fruit shop, bakery, and butchery. This mall has become the most popular shopping destination as people can aces all they need once by going there instead of visiting each of these shops separately.
However, on the flip side, there are many local businesses which is owned by a family. These stores must be shut down and this result in higher rate of unemployment. Also, these people have to move to the cities to find jobs which is not very appealing for them. Furthermore, local businesses are a place that present cultures and traditional parts of a country. If they close down, those unique products also will vanish by time.
in a nutshell, I believe that big shopping malls are harming small local businesses and the construction of them should be controlled and regulated by the government to protect the owner of local entrepreneurs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88257575758 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66382154957 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9279946982 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262363261045 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964634584783 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063012591823 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158367279255 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475503592572 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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