Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to you regarding the scanner pro that I purchased from your company 6 months ago. My scanner stopped working two days ago after I was trying to scan a 2-page document. First the tiny light at the back went red and it shut down after couple of minutes.
I am a document controller in a very big company. Every day I have considerable amount of documents that I need to review. Most of the time I have to scan the paper ones as we communicate through computer network because I work from home. This issue has impacted my daily duties heavily. I have to go out of house maybe two or three times a day which is very time consuming.
I will send this scanner to you today. Could you please substitute this and send me a new one as it has been less than a year I own this product.
Look forward to hearing back from you.
Faithfully yours,
Sarah Jackson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ment controller in a very big company. and every day I have tons of documents that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing back from you. Faithfully yours, Sarah Jackson
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Faithfully yours, Sarah Jackson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18235294118 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27993352662 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5563257001 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.25 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13206485296 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436411424837 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325770029812 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769783813108 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150921742434 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.