You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• Say how your work could be done while you are away
• Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in working at our company headquarters located in new York for a short span of time.
As you are already aware of the implementation of the new ERP module – Ariba which we will be helpful for us to get the auctions done at a much faster rate. this is quite an effective way of cost cutting as we do not have to pay anymore to the third party for the e-bids. The team will be able to execute the projects more efficiently and conveniently. Despite of all these reasons stated above, I would like to learn the process and method of working at the head office.
Mr Ben will be taking care of my roles and responsibilities in my absence. However, I will be in touch with him on a regular basis and will be available on calls where ever I am required. I have made him well aware of the things to be taken on priority. I would request you to kindly support with all the necessary approvals for travel plan.
I look forward to a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...he auctions done at a much faster rate. this is quite an effective way of cost cutti...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e necessary approvals for travel plan. I look forward to a positive response fro...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36923076923 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6013196469 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5338540979 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4545454545 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167765393311 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590537647165 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537648354627 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962716149552 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488244464435 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.