You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest to pursue a short-term opportunity at the head office in Bulgaria for six months.
I came to know about this position from the weekly internal job posting email. I am really interested to work at the head office in Bulgaria to initiate a new project that involves the latest technology on which I got trained recently. This visit will also provide an opportunity for me to work with people directly involved in the project and enrich my skills and experience. I will utilize the knowledge gained from the project for the expanding the business of the company.
I will also ensure that I will transition all of my tasks to another resource, so he can efficiently take over my activities which I am currently handling to make sure the business here is not affected. Moreover, I will also offer my help to the associate when required.
I would like your help in arranging the backup resource for me and helping me with travel arrangements to Bulgaria. It will be helpful if you can get me in touch with someone who is already stationed there to guide me.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John Davis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the weekly internal job posting email. I am really interested to work at the hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75598086124 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64360886703 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617224880383 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4759312049 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2029457376 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721274378923 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510123387005 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964677849534 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612573588766 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.