In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this?
Nowadays, parents are more concerned about the safety of teenagers playing outside especially during night time.Some people are of the opinion that children should not be let alone outside during late evening other feel that they should be allowed to play outside without any restrictions.This essay will discuss the importance of curfew on teenagers when they are outdoors during night.
The adults accompanying the teenager at a particular time in the evening is paramount to keep them Safe from child abusers and drug dealers.Most of the drug dealers venture out during the dusk time to avoid being identified.They lure children to come along with them by offering them expensive gifts.Children are too young to understand the intentions of such people and often fall into their trap.For example, according to a research conducted by private organization it is revealed that every year many teenagers in the US are often victims of such abusers.Perhaps, the one of the ways to prevent such cases from occurring in future is to accompany the child when they are outdoors during night time.
Teenagers usually play outdoor games like basket ball and soccer.They are so much involved in the game that they are often unaware of the surroundings.Moreover, some areas are poorly lit during the nights and there are some instances where they have got hurt due to accidents while playing.Accompanying Adults will always make sure that the children is not venturing out of play area during the game and hurting himself.Also, adults can get immediate help to children in case they get hurt.
This essay discussed how teenager are safe when they are accompanied by adults especially during night time.In my opinion, the parent should always accompany children when venture out during night time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24567474048 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00288212191 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.614748844 49.4020404114 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 379.0 106.682146367 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.25 20.7667163134 348% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266494910712 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17436101314 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306749522125 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17436101314 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306749522125 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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