You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it,
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to request your help in making possible for me to work in the head office of the company for a short period of time. I am looking forward to improving my résumé by working over there.
In order to accentuate my knowledge and international work experience, I am eager to do job in head office of our company situated in Canada. It would not only benefit me to learn how it works but will also give me insight about different departments. Further I would be able to management skills since I would experience that how staff manages many branch offices located worldwide.
As you know that the project on which I am working has been halted for six months due to certain operational faults. Miss. Anita agrees to perform minor level office responsibilities on my behalf as she has shown her willingness to do so for me. So I believe that during this time, work related to me will be not be affected negatively.
To accomplish my dream of working in the office, I need your help as well as support. If you recommend my name for the head office, I will be granted NOC from HR department. Could you please help me in this regard?
It would be a huge favor if you could send my name with your comments.I am looking forward seeing your response as early as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Marie.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... head office of the company for a short period of time. I am looking forward to improving my r...
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Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...u could send my name with your comments.I am looking forward seeing your response...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51037344398 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65256569198 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.727933149 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6153846154 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326387485215 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113637115229 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619599939395 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180520111216 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448964832158 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.