You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Philippe,
I am writing to express my interest to work in our head quarter in United Kingdom for some time. It will be a great opportunity for me to learn more and get global feedback about our brand.
As you know, I recently promoted to the post of Assistant product manager and working hard to learn new things to promote our brand and increase sales. I also must to speak to our team in head office to take further actions to promote our brand. I feel, that I should work in our head office for six months to learn about global aspects of our brand and attend training sections which are organized in head office in London. I hope to learn new things will benefit our company.
I already speak to Farhan, he will take care of my work in my absence. Furthermore, on my return, I will sit late hours if it require to complete my work.
Looking for your cooperation approval in this regard.
Yours sincerely,
Muhammad Zubair
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...te our brand and increase sales. I also must to speak to our team in head office to tak...
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Line 9, column 426, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are organized in head office in London. I hope to learn new things will benefit o...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...w things will benefit our company. I already speak to Farhan, he will take c...
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Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
... my return, I will sit late hours if it require to complete my work. Looking for y...
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
...rn, I will sit late hours if it require to complete my work. Looking for your cooperat...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours sincerely, Muhammad Zubair
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61046511628 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35919744858 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2532079735 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234417846192 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938595679902 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609529784924 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126358135963 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413555083371 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.