You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the training course you want to do
• explain what the company could do to help you
• say how the course will be useful for your job
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your knowledge about the training course titled “Global marketing access” advertised in Hindustan Times. I want your permission to participate in this training program as it would be helpful for the organization.
The training program will take place from 20 September to 23 September in Mumbai in Radisson Hotel. The cost of attending the seminar inclusive of the hotel and meal is Rs 3000. Some of the well-known experts in international marketing around the world to speak on marketing and how to have a global reach.
Since our company is planning to expand globally and to have the global market of our product. This training program will benefit a lot as it will give us the knowledge and will answer many of our questions like how to have a global reach? how to promote the product internationally? How to attract customers? And so on.
This training program will not only be helpful for my professional life and career but also for the organisation as after gaining the useful knowledge and erudition I will be able to take the actionable steps for the expansion of the organization. Moreover, the organization will benefit from high customer retention and expansion both nationally and internationally
I hope you will allow me to take the leave from 20 September till 23 September and if you could consider reimbursing the amount spend for attending the training program. I will resume my duties from 24th September.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...usive of the hotel and meal is Rs 3000. Some of the well-known experts in international mar...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...stions like how to have a global reach? how to promote the product internationally?...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...resume my duties from 24th September. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06488549618 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96567832813 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.4098633251 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282985116258 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784810764292 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071677221523 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133947881467 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722654641321 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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