You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a
training course which will be useful for you job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request some helps for attending in advanced course of data-driven. Last night, when I had browsed on net, I saw an advertisement about a three-days course around data- driven which is held by Tehran university.
This course is about data-driven and its application in reservoir simulation. As you know, I have passed the basic course of data-driven and now attending the advanced one will definitely help me to apply it in my work.
This course will run from 24th to 26th of next month attendants have to enroll two weeks advance. I hope you will approve my leave application for those three days. Besides, its tuition comes at huge cost and by dealing circumstance I trust that you will kindly loan me a mortgage to assist in covering the expense.
Data-driven is one of the ramifications of artificial intelligent. Applying it in simulation plays a significant role in achieving results with highest accuracy. In addition, it speeds up simulation process as much as possible so that time-consuming would be half.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Your faithfully,
Sahar Masoumi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...a significant role in achieving results with highest accuracy. In addition, it speeds up sim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02051282051 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03060869895 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671794871795 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3069870328 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253415315319 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821346917285 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060267067113 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127261716234 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597698799414 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.