You worked for a company abroad, but had to quit suddenly and return to your hometown. Write a letter to your colleagues to say goodbye. In you letter
– Explain why you had to leave.
– Apologize for not saying goodbye properly.
– Why would you miss them?
Dear Colleagues,
I am James, working in IT Department in your company. I am writing this letter to say my goodbye to you all as I am moving back to my home in India. I joined this company 2 years back and due to some unavoidable circumstances I have to go back in next 2 days.
Hope you all support me on my decision of going back, after knowing the reasons behind this decision.
My mother is not keeping good health these days and I am the only son to her, so it is my prime responsibility to take care of my mother. She was hospitalized due to cardiac attack occurred 3 days back, her condition is stable now, that is why, I have decided to leave, to look after her.
As I am moving back on such a short notice,so I am not feeling good. I want to meet you all in person but unable to do so, please excuse me for that. Hope this will not effect our relationships.
During my tenure with this company I have learnt lot many things. I enjoyed the working environment of this company.
We all worked as a family, so I will miss you all. Please be in touch with me on mail id James129@gmail.com.
Finally, I wish a very good luck to all of you and this company for coming future.
Your Sincerely,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s I am moving back to my home in India. I joined this company 2 years back and du...
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Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
... I am moving back on such a short notice,so I am not feeling good. I want to meet y...
^^^
Line 8, column 170, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... excuse me for that. Hope this will not effect our relationships. During my tenu...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this will not effect our relationships. During my tenure with this company I hav...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27038626609 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67028679717 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575107296137 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7418961464 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169843961537 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627236178584 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628760247257 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880145506061 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053646884486 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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