You would like to attend a training course. Write a letter to your company manager and say
– Why would you like to attend this course?
– Why would it be beneficial for you and the company?
– Suggest how to arrange time for it.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirits. It is my immense pleasure to tell you that IBM limited is going to organize an imperative short-term training program in CAD designing and I want to attend the same. The reason behind to attend this course is that I want to enhance my technical skills as well as productivity. However, it is an arduous course but I will do it.
Now let me tell you the benefits of this course, If I would complete this course then we can increase not only our productivity but also improve our quality of products. Last but not least, another vital thing I would like to mention that It is a weekend program so I will not take any leave from the office. Even I will do extra work on weekdays.
I hope you (will) consider my request and give me permission to attend the training program. I will be very thankful to you.
Yours faithfully
Jai
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45773265979 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0327781307 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275652702014 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965300012269 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487032515351 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177989697139 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00859858369283 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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