You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur residence of Patiala, Punjab. Through this letter, I want to enquire about some electrical things whether you have this in your shop or not.
Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, I need Phillip decoration lamps, electrical bulbs in multicolour, a DVD player with high quality of sound buffers, and also a radio which has one year of warranty. Secondly, let me know do you have all these things or not. If you don't have all these goods, then could you please order them for me?
Moreover, could you provide the bill amount of all these equipment including goods service tax applicable on these? Further, I want to know how long time you can hold these things for me. Please reply me back as soon as possible or contact me on my contact number that is 9465382685. If you do this, not I get my goods on time, but also I refer your shop to my other friends.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings for the day! My name is Amanp...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ou have all these things or not. If you dont have all these goods, then could you pl...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'these equipments'?
Suggestion: this equipment; these equipments
...ould you provide the bill amount of all these equipment including goods service tax applicable ...
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Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65573770492 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40859043678 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2919227179 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178434778598 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652890415739 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711584621395 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083978366969 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717636138678 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.