You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Greetings for the day!
My name is Amanpreet Kaur residence of Patiala, Punjab. Since I have never got a chance to met your shop, so I am still not sure whether you have all the electronic equipment or not. Through this letter, I want to enquire about some these.
Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, I need Phillip decoration lamps, electrical bulbs in multicolour, a DVD player with high quality of sound buffers, and also a radio which has one year of warranty. Secondly, let me know do you have all these things or not. If you do not have, then could you please order them for me?
Moreover, could you provide the bill amount of all these types of equipment including goods service tax applied to these? Further, I have to go out of town to attend the family function so, I want to know how long time you can hold these things for me. Please contact me on my telephone number that is 9465382685. If you do this, not I get my goods on time, but also I refer your shop to my other friends.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings for the day! My name is Ama...
^^^
Line 12, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onse. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50980392157 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39139332077 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2449745908 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7692307692 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182078327905 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602488109377 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585420859039 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799590903979 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674790723489 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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