You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop
1- ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
2- Ask what the prices are
3- how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention that I aim to buy a Play Station from your shop at the branch nearest to my house in the town.
Several versions of the Play Station are announced to be released in the market, hence I would like that you inform me if you have all versions or only the specific one related to the standard model. I am looking for the full-option model which it has two joysticks as a package. If you do not have that version, please advise me when you will be able to order it.
Although the prices are known for all models at all other markets, but your shop currently offers a considerable discount on some gadgets, and I wonder if the aimed device is included. Could you please share the updated price list?
Tomorrow, a booking of one number of the full-version type will be made by myself; however, I won`t be able to pass by for collection. Please advise the period as per your policy of keeping the device in stock till the collection by customer.
Look forward to receiving your soonest feedback.
Yours Faithfully,
Ayoub.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58883248731 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50551711567 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2126734212 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19964970283 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722019713282 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792145920076 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916861626731 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650048575114 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.