You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.
Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter:
say which electrical goods you want
ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay
explain how you will collect the goods.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your kind attention that I am planning to buy electrical goods from your shop.
Let me explain my situation in more detail that I would like to procure air conditioner from your place. One of my friend told me about his experience while dealing with your representative and the company is providing five years warranty. This facility encouraged me to consult you and inquire more things what you could offer.
I would like to know that how much I have to pay for the same with ratings of kilowatt and ought to be less than six kilograms in weight. Kindly elaborate payment mode whether you accept online transactions or not.
Regarding delivery, I would prefer to have courier mode without that delay probably fast track service. Please do not forget to mention delivery time and the choices you have in your products.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Iqbal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your kind attention...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99382716049 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5290644007 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697530864198 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4753640757 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255240265845 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872919749737 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057626076424 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127312137239 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732379471502 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.