You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.
Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter:
say which electrical goods you want
ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay
explain how you will collect the goods.
Dear Rajan,
I am writing this letter to enquire about Air conditioner you have in stock, the weather is getting hotter day by day, therefore I have decided to purchase it immediately but your shop in out of town, therefore I am writing to enquire first.
Furthermore, I wish to know the variety of range you have in terms of cost and different brands of product. Please inform the Mode of payment also, I do have credit card and internet banking facility, therefore, make me aware of your facility so that I can processed on early basis.
I am not available in upcoming week, thus I request you to do not dispatch the item during that time, make the delivery schedule of item in next month or if not possible please inform me before so that I can make courier arrangement of item before leaving home.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and do the needful on time. Waiting for your response.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rajan, I am writing this letter to enquire abou...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'process'
Suggestion: process
...me aware of your facility so that I can processed on early basis. I am not available in ...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ful on time. Waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Vishal
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your response. Yours sincerely, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63253012048 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59878847796 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.1073551973 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13547645253 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644723158401 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028942784463 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733861010935 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317029499271 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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