You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends Tell your friend about your birthdayExplain how much the visit would mean to youSuggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit

Dear James,
Hello¡ Hope my letter will find you in the warmth of life. Actually, I am penning you down to invite you on my birthday which is on 13 the of July ie after 2 months.
Though the party I am throwing is not so grand, but still, you being my special friend, I’d love to see you on my special day. The time of ours in Europe at the time of our third level education etched in my memory forever. You were an excellent friend and host during my visit. Our night studies and weekend midnight habit of hooping around the corners of the city is still fresh in my mind. I miss those days and I really want to relive that life. Only difference is, this time I will be your host. Sending you the invitation in much advance so that you can plan your schedule accordingly. It would be delighted to have you here.
Though not necessary to mention still, not to worry about accommodation, as you will be staying with me, at my flat. Do let me know your dates, so that I can arrange tickets for you.
Waiting to have your glimpse at my door.
Love,
Neha

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, if, really, so, still, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23645320197 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23233709024 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8403363953 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1538461538 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281419504265 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952674935471 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761730744257 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170005777296 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441983414638 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.