You would like to invite before and friend to visit you for your birthday write a letter inviting your friends
Tell your friend about your birthday
Explain how much the visit would mean to you
Suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit
Dear John
Hi ! how are you? I am fine and hope you are also sailing on the same boat .I am penning down this missive to invite you on my birthday party.
As I completed my 24 ears of the life and it would be my 25th birthday which I intend to celebrate .It has been a long time to meet all the friends. Indeed , this is the reason of my birthday celebration . I organised a grand party and I invited all our college friends on my birthday party so it is a great opportunity to meet all of them And once again ,we would do a lots of fun together and you will definitely come, I do not want to hear any excuse because you are my best friend and if you would not come then your absence would spoil my birthday.
In addition,all the friends will stayed at my home and you will also stayed at my home but not only for that day, you will visit here for three to four days so that we can create lots of memories and I will take you from the airport,you just tell me when you will come? There are many good places to visit in my country which we would definitely visit.
Pay my regards to your family and I am waiting of your prompt reply.
Your truly
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear John Hi ! how are you? I am fine and hope you are als...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...pe you are also sailing on the same boat .I am penning down this missive to invite...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... you are also sailing on the same boat .I am penning down this missive to invite ...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...5th birthday which I intend to celebrate .It has been a long time to meet all the ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...h birthday which I intend to celebrate .It has been a long time to meet all the fr...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ong time to meet all the friends. Indeed , this is the reason of my birthday celeb...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is the reason of my birthday celebration . I organised a grand party and I invited...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...unity to meet all of them And once again ,we would do a lots of fun together and y...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...all of them And once again ,we would do a lots of fun together and you will definitely...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r and you will definitely come, I do not want to hear any excuse because you are ...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... want to hear any excuse because you are my best friend and if you would not come...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
... would spoil my birthday. In addition,all the friends will stayed at my home and...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stay'
Suggestion: stay
...ay. In addition,all the friends will stayed at my home and you will also stayed at...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... addition,all the friends will stayed at my home and you will also stayed at my h...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stay'
Suggestion: stay
...ll stayed at my home and you will also stayed at my home but not only for that day, y...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...ies and I will take you from the airport,you just tell me when you will come? There ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06956521739 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14324296196 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.367288205 44.8134815571 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327731097758 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135742536192 0.0766984524023 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792587274211 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184432789698 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424108309823 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.