Many criminals commit for the crimes as soon as the released from prison?
What do you think are the causes.
What possible solutions can you suggest .
Now a days in many countries, the crime rate is at a mammoth rate. Once the criminal is set free from the prison, they will do the crime again. There are numerous reasons which are responsible for uprooting the problem. However, some solvents are there to curb this problem. I will portray inspector and remedies involving segments
The predominant reason of this is, many criminals are not born offenders but the circumstances often incite them to commit a felony. When such type of predominated convicts are came out from prisons, they are expelled from the society and isolated from their own families. Due to this, they inclined to recommit the crimes. In addition, after releasing from prisons, criminals find it very difficult to get the job because of their criminal record. For instance, in India, if any one want to acquire the job, it is essential that applicant do not have any record of indulging in any criminal activities. Because of this reason, they again indulged in illegal practices to earn their livelihood to sustain life such as robbing, thefting etcetera and after a passage of time became serious killers in their life.
However, there are some solvants to eradicate this problem. Primarily, it is the responsibility of the government that they ought to urge people that they should not expel the criminals. Besides this, people should give another chance to criminals to usher the new life. Subsequently, offenders should get a chance to show their superiority among the people.In addition, government should make an arrangements in the prison, to give the offenders some technical or other things training so that after releasing from prison ,delinquents use their skills to combat with the hurdles of their life.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that there is a need to understand the gravity of the problem and address it before it gets too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71098011782 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8953013091 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140760953657 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492665580286 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503878147049 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833612195382 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461890055259 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.