You recently stayed in a hotel large City was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating cooling system in the hotel was quite indicate
Give detail What was wrong
what you had to do for overcome
Say what action you would like the manage to hotel
Dear sir
last weekend I stayed at your steam water for 3 night I am paining this a pistol to tell you about some problem which I had faced during staying at your hotel
I stayed at your hotel from 5 to 8 January when we weather was very cold it is about 4 degree Celsius on that time and in your hotels there was no waiting facility and when I asked the stuff they said me that heating system is not included in package if you want but they arrange it is due to this you have to pay extra money and to overcome this problem I request them to provide extra but quite was also not in good condition there were many stains on the Quilt and lots of smell which is very unbearable for me
I would be very grateful if you take steps to solve this problem firstly the heating system as that in future your customer will not suffer from these problems at and you should keep an eye on your lower staff member so that they can done there work properly
i forward to hearing from you
Thanking you
Sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...acility and when I asked the stuff they said me that heating system is not included ...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'do' or 'be done'?
Suggestion: do; be done
...our lower staff member so that they can done there work properly i forward to hea...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...at they can done there work properly i forward to hearing from you Thanking...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18367346939 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96785390199 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 196.0 16.3608247423 1198% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 820.0 76.5299724578 1071% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 196.0 16.8248392259 1165% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 4.34317383033 760% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280194369852 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280194369852 0.0766984524023 365% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156583713287 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632513360121 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 96.3 8.37731958763 1150% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -102.08 70.7449484536 -144% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 76.2 7.45979381443 1021% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.15 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.29 7.59969072165 201% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.4 8.54432989691 941% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 8.15463917526 638% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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