You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.Write at least 150 words.

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.
Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir / Madam,

My name is Ravi Chaudhary. I am currently working as a sales Team Leader in a Private Company, Anron Enigma Infosystem, which is situated in Gurgaon, India. I have learned that your expert team will be conducting a seminar about Artificial Intelligence in Australia. I am writing this letter requesting information about the Seminar as I am planning to attend it.

Firstly, about the schedule, when likely is the seminar conducted, for how many days and where exactly in Australia. Also, what are the in and out timings and how many hours do I need to engage every day.

Secondly, I would like to get a detailed information about the Program such as, necessary things that I can carry with myself and how this Seminar/Program can benefit me being from a Sales background.

Finally, requesting you to provide information for accommodation if any provided by your team and overall cost for the Program. As I will be traveling all the way from India with no acquaintance there. How much money do I need to carry for overall Journey.

Your Response is awaited, as I am looking forward to join the Seminar.

Sincerely,
Ravi Chaudhary

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t Artificial Intelligence in Australia. I am writing this letter requesting infor...
^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... team and overall cost for the Program. As I will be traveling all the way from In...
^^
Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to joining'.
Suggestion: to joining
...nse is awaited, as I am looking forward to join the Seminar. Sincerely, Ravi Chaudh...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93401015228 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89139539494 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.496254524 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180461033976 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567088578064 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05472524381 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963337075379 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302773708629 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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