You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire some information about the seminar that your organisation is going to conduct in Mumbai through an advertisement in the newspaper. I work a manager in customer service in XYZ Company and the content of the seminar will help me to provide with the knowledge that is important for my role in the organisation
Firstly, with regard to the date and time, I would like to know the exact duration of seminar along with the dates. Secondly, please notify me of the topics and speakers of the program. And finally, I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the seminar?
I am very much interested in attending the seminar and your reply would help me plan for it in advance. So, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns.
Yours faithfully,
Parul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79885057471 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82726495699 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1809340159 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 4.34317383033 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275611535659 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987464886411 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490488651546 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17249215114 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054540070857 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.