You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am Prabhpreet Kaur, senior manager in customer service in Hamilton company. I am writing this letter to enquire about the seminar on customer service and marketing in Sydney, Australia in December 2018 through an advertisement in newspaper. I am planning to attend this seminar and need some further information.
Firstly, with regard to the date and time, I would like to know the exact duration of seminar along with the dates. Secondly, please let me know of the topics and speakers of the program and will there be any hands-on or just theoretical sessions. And finally, as I will be travelling from India I would also like to know about the accommodation and the cost. Would the accommodation be arranged by you or should an individual be responsible for that? What would be the approximate cost to attend and successfully finish the seminar?
I am very much interested in attending the seminar and your reply would help me plan for it in advance. So, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... through an advertisement in newspaper. I am planning to attend this seminar and ...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96174863388 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86653562446 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6141986014 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220170412397 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079712835428 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504412567302 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136905370507 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502120029329 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.