You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. Write:-
- what job you would like to apply
- what companies are you looking for
- why do you want to work overseas
Dear sir,
I am writing with reference to the international jobs advertised on your agency website on 26th April 2019. My credentials matched the advertised job of pharmacist assistant and I want to apply for it. I am enclosing my cv for this job
Let me explain my situation in detail, I want to apply for pharmacist assistant. I have a 3 year working experience in the field and I have a masters degree in business administration. I believe with these I am qualified for the position.
I want to work for a multinational pharmaceutical production company because of my vast knowledge and experience in that field. In addition, i did training in supply chain management which i know will be beneficial in that line of work.
There are a plethora of reasons why i will be delighted to work abroad. Firstly, better renumerations, pharmacist assistants are well paid overseas. Secondly;political stability, countries like Newzealand and Australia are politically stable which makes their fiscal policies quite stable and efficient. lastly, my families stay overseas so i will love to relocate and be with them.
Thanks for your consideration, i look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Ibekwe Primus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing with reference to the inter...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ese I am qualified for the position. I want to work for a multinational pharma...
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Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... experience in that field. In addition, i did training in supply chain management...
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Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'train'
Suggestion: train
...ience in that field. In addition, i did training in supply chain management which i know...
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Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aining in supply chain management which i know will be beneficial in that line of...
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Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... There are a plethora of reasons why i will be delighted to work abroad. Firs...
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Line 8, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...al policies quite stable and efficient. lastly, my families stay overseas so i will lo...
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Line 8, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t. lastly, my families stay overseas so i will love to relocate and be with them....
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Line 10, column 32, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...them. Thanks for your consideration, i look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ibekwe Primus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18592964824 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3282647929 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6532619817 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206282864257 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616118953628 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452016257558 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109169786084 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344136077998 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.